As the train entered the tunnel ... I had finally finished listening to my music on my mp3 player. Thud! Thud! Thud! I heard on the gleaming, shiny curved roof. Suddenly the emergency hatch flopped open.
"Bully!" I cried. I thought this was a NO dog area!
Suddenly my Mum noticed that my puppy was back, so she asked me, "How did you find him?".
"It's a long story, " I replied.
Goodness me Lauren! What an interesting 100 word challenge. You got me intrigued right from the start, and I particularly liked the 'Thud! Thud! Thud!' and was trying to think what might make that noise. Good ending too, its keeps your reader thinking about what might have happened. I think you are a natural at writing short stories - well done.
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